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Nólë i Ataro

EMPTY, DRIZZLING WOOD
A hooded figure enters the sheltered clearing, ARAGORN leans against a wide tree, a hood cover his face.

ARAGORN
(quietly, half-dismayed)
The world has been turned upside
down, I barely recognize anything
for what it was before. Our history
has changed so much. How can
anything be returned to what it
once was?

OLDER RANGER
(coolly, distanced)
It cannot, Strider, you of all
should know that.

ARAGORN
(hurt)
Then what are we to do? The wilds
do not accept us, those of our own
race do not,
(to himself)
and even Imladris is no longer mine
to call home.

The OLDER RANGER turns, and leaves.

OLDER RANGER
(derisively, over his shoulder)
That, Strider, is the question we
all seek. There is nothing that we
can do. All you can do is continue
on with life as best you're able.
Grow up, and see the world for what
it is.

ARAGORN watches him leave, smoldering.

ARAGORN
(under his breath)
Grow up. Is that all that you say?
What do you know of growing up? You
still have your family to turn to,
to confide in. This very place is
forsaken...

RIVENDELL, HEALING WARDS

ELROND checks ARAGORN's fever in growing concern.

ELROND
There is a malice that he fights,
'ere the fever ever began. Some
anger, I perceive.

ARAGORN stirs feverishly. A single, shallow wound across his chest bleeds heavily.

ERESTOR aids ELROND crushing herbs at a side table and cleaning the cut.

ERESTOR
Though I have not the hands and
eyes that you do, Lord Elrond, this
wound baffles me. It is but a small
thing, only slightly deeper then a
scratch, and yet it bleeds heavily,
and is sorely inflamed.

ELROND looks up, worried, then examines it again.

ERESTOR
It is not poisoned, that much is
clear, though beyond that I am not
certain.

ELROND
(turning to address Elladan who
watches from the doorway)
Tell me again, where you
found him.

ELLADAN
Near the eastern borders. It was
clear that he was on his way here,
though alone, by the look of
things.

ELROND's fingers ghost the jagged slice, his expression probing.

The storm outside thunders as the rain begins to lash against the window.

ELROND's face darkens and he suddenly jerks back, as if struck.

ELROND
Valar... Estel!

ERESTOR pauses in his herb crushing.

ERESTOR
My lord?

ELROND
There is far more to this 'scratch'
then he would have us believe.
(resting a hand on ARAGORN's feverish forehead.)
It is a wound inflicted by a morgul
blade. It is a wonder that he made
it even thus far.

ELLADAN blanches.

ERESTOR hands ELROND a handful of dried leaves.

ERESTOR
Time may be short, hir nin.

ELROND accepts the leaves with a nod, hastily crushing them and turning them into a thick paste.

ELROND
(softly, in deepening concern, while spreading the paste into the cut)
That it is... even too short,
perhaps. I will need you to watch
his fever, and act as necessary.
Later, we must reset the knee lest
it become any worse, but I fear
this cut must come first. Too much
time has already passed, and if we
do not know what remains of the
knife used....

EMPTY, HALF-LIT FOREST, DUSK.

FELLOW RANGER
(Invisible between the trees. Derisively.)
Go home, Strider, and grow up.

CLOSE UP of a tear slowly rolling down ARAGORN's face.

CUT TO: ORC ATTACK

ARAGORN heads the final miles to Imladris, limping heavily.

Faint, marching footsteps are heard.

ARAGORN spins around, nearly crumpling with the added weight on his injured knee, short sword in hand.

ORCS are seen between the trees, surrounding him from a distance.
ARAGORN readies himself, preparing for their attack. His confusion when they do not move is clear.

A strong breeze gusts through, fanning out his cloak.

With an faint growl, ORC CAPTAIN steps forward.

ORC CAPTAIN swings at ARAGORN, intentionally missing, but taking advantage of his weakness.

ARAGORN dodges, but crumples, his knee giving in. He looses his grasp on the sword while trying not to fall.

ORC CAPTAIN
Ranger...Strider. You are hated by
the ones you would call your own.

ARAGORN freezes. ORC CAPTAIN pins ARAGORN's bad knee down by stepping on it. ARAGORN hisses in pain and can't reach his sword.

ORC CAPTAIN
Run home to the safety of the
elves, and tell Elrond that my
master sends his greetings.

ARAGORN frowns, his expression taut as he struggles to stand, but fails.

ORC CAPTAIN lazily traces a slice in ARAGORN's heaving chest with a dark MORGUL blade, ending with it resting against ARAGORN's heart.

ORC CAPTAIN
Go home, little Ranger, go home and
know that I could have killed you,
here and now. Tell Elrond that
we're watching the roads.

HEALING WARDS-ARAGORN's bedside.

ELROND is bent over ARAGORN, concentrating as he examines the cut more closely.

ERESTOR carefully cleans out ARAGORN's knee while ELLADAN holds him still.

ARAGORN stirs, frantically shaking his head, trying to elude

ELROND's touch. ARAGORN's leg shakes under ELROHIR's grip.

ELROND murmurs under his breath.
ELROND
(sharply)
Athelas! Is there not any fresh
athelas to be found?

AID hurries in from hall.

AID
(handing Athelas leaves to ELROND)
My lord, it is nearly three days
old, but is the freshest that there
is to be found.

ELROND nods distractedly, accepting the leaves. ELROND crushes them and breathes on them before casting them into a nearby dish of hot water.

ELROND
Ava ranya, yondonya! Estel, that is
not your path. Return, and find the
love that will last.
(his voice cracks)
Estel, if not for me, come back for
your brothers...for Arwen.

ARAGORN shudders, and falls deathly still. ELROND tenses, then ARAGORN stirs and wakes.
ELROND sits back in relief.

ELLADAN
Ai, Estel... must you scare us so?

ARAGORN blinks in confusion, and his expression crumples in pain with a low moan.

ELROND hands ERESTOR a cup of pain-killing tea.

ELROND
Get him to drink it... I want to
see to his knee. Elladan.. keep him
talking. See if you can learn what
happened.

ERESTOR convinces ARAGORN to drink the tea.

ELROND turns his attention to ARAGORN's knee.

Several minutes pass in which ELROND tends to ARAGORN's knee. ARAGORN grimaces in pain, ignoring ELLADAN's  questions.

ARAGORN
Lord Elrond...

ELROND
(worried)
Estel, rest, and save your energy.

ARSGORN shakes his head,

ARAGORN
Lord Elrond.... orcs. They watch
the roads.

ELROND pauses in his ministrations.

ELROND
The sentries would have reported,
had anything been amiss.

ARAGORN
That's because they're not in
Rivendell. Not yet. My lord, this
wound..
(grimacing)
This was their message to you. From
their master.

ELROND pauses in sudden understanding and sighs deeply.

ELROND
I see now, the meaning to this...
and the malice I felt within.

ERESTOR looks at him, slightly confused.

ELROND
(continuing)
The morgul blade. It is unheard of
that an orc would carry such a
weapon, and that had puzzled me
since the telling of your tale. Now
though, I understand. At least one
of the Ulairi haunt our doorstep.

A FEW HOURS LATER

ELROND
Aragorn, there is something else
that disturbs you, beyond the wound
or fever. Can you not tell me what
it is?

ARAGORN
(sighs heavily)
My lord....

ELROND
(grimaces)
Can you no longer call me Father?

ARAGORN glances at him for a long moment.

ARAGORN
(quietly)
I did not think you would allow me
to use that title again.

ELROND comes to sit by the bedside.

ELROND
No matter what comes between us,
you are always my son, Estel.

ARAGORN bites his lip.

ELROND
Is this what bothers you so deeply?

ARAGORN
Yes. No. It is the Rangers... there
are many among them that would be
far happier had I not joined them
and the patrol with them.

ELROND watches him, waiting, and saying nothing.

ARAGORN
Adar, there are but a few who
welcome even my presence. They
despise me, telling me I know
nothing of the world outside your
haven.

ELROND nods slowly, thinking.

ELROND
I do not regret having you return
to your kinsmen, for you should
know of their road, but I am
grieved that they would treat you
as such. True, they know of the
wilds from experience, but is
arrogant of them to treat you like
this. The question, Estel, is how
you will respond, for that is the
only thing that you can control.

ARAGORN frowns.

ARAGORN
I will not return to those men, but
the closest village. There, the men
guard the Shire as you well know.
(glancing at ELROND)
There, I might learn of my
kinsmen's ways, and those of the
folk they call the Halflings. I
have friends that will take me in
for a time while things cool off
between the others.

ELROND nods sagely.

ELROND
As you will, my son. I trust your
judgment.
(smiles wryly)
And it is a good thing to, for I
cannot tell you what to do, now can
I?

ARAGORN
(smiles ruefully)
You know that in most matters, I
would listen anyways.
(to himself)
Most matters.

END
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A birthday gift for :iconmirachravaia:


Note: all characters belong to Tolkien. The title means "The Love of a Father"
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=MirachRavaia Mar 14, 2010   General Artist
It seems that when you need athelas most, the one you can get is always at least three days old... :)

Thank you very much for this story, I'm really honored to get such a great present! :rose:
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~openmeadow Mar 15, 2010  Student Writer
Ha, so true! SOmebody really ought to do something about that, shouldn't they?

I'm very happy you enjoyed it! And, it was an honor to write it for you.
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=MirachRavaia Mar 15, 2010   General Artist
Yes, they should find a way how to grow it in a flowerpot! :)

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~openmeadow Mar 15, 2010  Student Writer
I think that was kind of the point, wasn't it? That it's rare-ish ? :D
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=MirachRavaia Mar 15, 2010   General Artist
yes, but are there no bothanics in Rivendell? I would do some experiments, if I would be allowed :D
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~openmeadow Mar 15, 2010  Student Writer
If you were allowed... I will have to get some one to talk to Elrond about this, you might be on to something!
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Very philosophical!
(and the name of Arwen seems to replace a shocker as a means of reanimation =))
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~openmeadow Mar 13, 2010  Student Writer
Yes, I did have tad bit of fun with that one! Glad you enjoyed it :D
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